How's My Driving?

[luministimods]

Hello, everyone! As the game has been running for several months now, it is time for a How's My Driving? post.

If you choose to participate, comment here with the name and journal of your character(s) in the game, and other players will comment with constructive criticism and positive feedback about how you've been playing your character(s). In return, you can give feedback to other players, too! The idea here is that we're all working together in the game, so naturally we want to help each other's performance.

To make this as positive and helpful as possible, there are a few guidelines:
1. As mentioned above, we want this to be constructive. It is most helpful for other players if you are as specific as possible with your comments/advice. That way, the players will have a clear idea of what you feel they need to improve upon--or keep doing!
2. We want to encourage everyone to be open and honest, but in the interest of allowing you to feel safe, anonymous commenting is enabled.
3. Trolling and flames are not permitted. This about helping each other to improve, and neither of those things would accomplish that, so please be polite and constructive with the advice that you give.
4. This is completely optional. You don't have to post with your character if you would rather not receive feedback.

That said, let the HMD commence!

Comments

[fortune_sought]

Sophie Hatter | fortune_sought
Sara Kingdom | finalwished

[collector]

⊕ Braxiatel trechier {private concrit}

[bit_impossible]

The Doctor (Tenth) || bit_impossible

[wind-of-reason.livejournal.com]

Fuu Hououji ~~ wind_of_reason

Although this is technically my fourth lj rpg, it's only the second that I've had so much activity in. I will really value your concrit! In particular, this is the first time I've so heavily used first-person, present-tense logging. I'm curious to know how I'm doing with that and if there is anything I could be doing better, (particularly when it comes to formatting). ^.^

[irreversibly.livejournal.com]

Xion {alternate universe} ; irreversibly ; {private concrit (http://irreversibly.livejournal.com/1009.html)}