Although this is technically my fourth lj rpg, it's only the second that I've had so much activity in. I will really value your concrit! In particular, this is the first time I've so heavily used first-person, present-tense logging. I'm curious to know how I'm doing with that and if there is anything I could be doing better, (particularly when it comes to formatting). ^.^
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Although this is technically my fourth lj rpg, it's only the second that I've had so much activity in. I will really value your concrit! In particular, this is the first time I've so heavily used first-person, present-tense logging. I'm curious to know how I'm doing with that and if there is anything I could be doing better, (particularly when it comes to formatting). ^.^